“I spent ten years in seclusion; now I am invincible after emerging.”

I want Lucilia to sit on my face like I want it, I need It, i desire it, I wish for it, type shit, ya feel me? Overall peak chapter but like add a chapter were Lucilia shows that cake off to the MC

This is a book no one will regret reading

Why is this actually peak💀When you commented, I lowkey thought it was going to be a smut ff of you and Sasiki lol, ur honestly really good at writing. This is a Furina approved novel👍

The book is amazing with its perks but I can't really relate with the characterAsides from that, the book is a great read

just seeing how far this goes,still planning on writing maybe a hundred or so chapters

This is going to have a lot of story and not just fights like in every other action novel, where only fights take place for viewer attraction, the story will have increasing beauty, and has a lot of inspiration taken from previous fantasy stories and has a lot of stuff, world building, characters with backstories, mysteries, jolly characters, darkness of the world, technology and dragons together, a mixture of eras, to have everything. Good chapter length, extra information, etc. Way to go for a Shonen Anime.

Let me go over one by one.Writing Quality had become great. I read and reviewed one of the author's previous books and from there, his writing quality has jumped way higher. There are no Grammer mistakes, at least none I could catch. There is a bit too much exposition sometimes, like explaining the customs of the land and their significance along with describing the reactions of the supporting main leads a bit too extensively. The first is needed in all respects lest the readers feel alienated but the latter could have been toned down just a bit, but that's just my opinion.Story Development so far is great. The author really catches your attention and doesn't let go. me, personally, I didn't like the addition of the harem from Greek mythology but that's just my personal preference. I do feel that it was revealed too soon, but then again, revealing it too late might have led to the readers growing attached to Draupadi only.Characters are all dynamic and serve their own purpose. Especially the character of Krishna was so beautifully added. I do have some bias about the way the author underlines the Dynamic between the Kauravas and the Pandavas though. In a lot of literary and TV media, you always see the authors or the directors take a side and support a particular group and the author does the same and supports the Kauravas. But there stands to reason that no one in the Mahabharata is actually a good character. They're certainly not bad as they are followers of Dharma, but they are evil in a way that does not violate the Dharma of that age and that has been beautifully underlined in the original Epic. But then again, these are all creative choices and the author writes the characters beautifully.Update Stablility is great.World Background instantly gets a five star since the work it's trying to adapt is so expansive and complex by itself. it can make way for a lot of interesting philosophical and narrative moments. and the existence of other myths only aids to that.Wish you well author! keep writing!

The fighting scenes are so well explained it was surreal, I like how he explained the expression the way he stabed and his system is well defined including penalties. the world building is also good  it was good read for me  I hope author dwell more on character building and continue it..